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# 9: November 19, 2002
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our feature article, "What's an eBook Worth?"
Feature Article: What's an eBook Worth?
eBook Author Interview: Dale Brooks, The Claypool Conspiracy
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eBook Author Interview: Carol Guy, Murder at the Ice Cream Parlor and A Picture Perfect Kid
Article: What's an eBook Worth?
how I wish that all things were free. The Internet briefly led us to believe that everything is free,
but as you can tell from all of the defunct companies,
there is always a price to pay.
let me say that there is a wealth of information available online for free. If you doubt that, just
visit Project Gutenberg, BookShare.org, or Blackmask.com. All
of these sites offer hundreds, if not thousands of
electronic novels for free. Of course, the text is usually not that
fancy, there's no cover art or packaging of any kind, and
oftentimes you have to do some fancy navigating to download what you
want. Still, the breadth of information from Shakespeare to Poe
authors, how can you compete?
thing to remember from the start is that you have an original and unique creation that is valuable. You
spent a lot of time and effort working on your creation, so
don't fall into the free or nearly free trap.
what your product is worth.
am sometimes amazed by what I see. For example, original ebooks selling for only 99 cents to 3 dollars. I
have to ask myself, why even bother at that point? When I see
an ebook priced at 99 cents, I don't even consider buying
it because it appears cheap.
don't think that's the image you want and I don't think that's the image that the ebook community needs.
products are valuable and in my opinion worth a comparable amount to other books. I feel like a broken
record and maybe I have said this before, but it's the
content not the media. If you price your content too low, you are
telling everyone that it's not really that good.
that the message you want to send? I hope not.
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Author Interview: Dale Brooks, The Claypool Conspiracy
It's hard to imagine a time when an eyewitness was what it took to convict a criminal. These days,
forensic science allows evidence from such things as DNA
"fingerprinting," hair analysis, and blood typing into the courtroom.
Your western The Claypool Conspiracy (http://www.puzzlesbyshar.com/adventurebooks)
is based on the true story of a Texas sheriff
and a doctor who together used forensic science to
solve the murder of a prominent rancher in the 1800s. It was the
first time a lawman west of the Mississippi had gone to trial in a murder case without
an eyewitness, and it forever changed the way
police investigations were done in the western United
States. When you first learned about this historical event, did you
immediately recognize its potential as a novel, or did your
idea for The Claypool Conspiracy germinate later? What was it
about this event that made it appealing to you as a writer?
Well, Diane, I had always dreamed of writing books, but realized you need a lot of time in solitude
to do so. I had never had that kind of time to spare from
my very busy life style. My number one priority was making a
living and raising a family of four children. Having been an
entertainer most of my life, it gave me connections with people in
radio who gave me my first job as a deejay. I had tried several
occupations such as a tool and die maker in a steel mill, set up a dry cleaning
business, ran night clubs, plus entertaining. But in radio
I found a home. I got into selling advertising on
radio, learned programming, management, and other skills
associated with radio, and was doing well at it. However, I knew there was
no "retirement" in this field...not unless you got into
ownership and created your own retirement. There were no pensions or
anything to live on when you did retire. I went back to school
and learned electronic engineering. To own and run a radio
station, you needed to know engineering to do it right in small
market radio. Even though I had no money or financial support, I
did get into partial ownership of radio stations, and
eventually met my goal of owning a station totally with no senior
these years I was still planning to write adventure books, but had no time to write. But a lot of the
hours I spent in my car calling on advertisers, I was
planning what to write about. I knew a book had to have a
"hook," an idea to capture the interest of readers, as you do with the
audience when on stage. You have to have an idea to capture their
attention and keep them concentrating on what you are doing.
So I had a mental outline of the story before I ever started writing. In radio we
were heavy on news, so I covered a lot of major crime cases on trial. I
frequently talked to lawyers, policemen, and other people in the court system
about cases in the news. I learned a lot about how crimes were investigated,
how clues were traced, how cases were built, and how they were tried. I was a
part-time city cop for several years, and that gave me inside information on
investigations. I knew that somebody, somewhere started the ball rolling on
forensic science, and got policemen into gathering physical evidence and using
it to prove a case. I never learned who actually started this chain, but did
find it was used in the bigger cities along the east coast before it finally
caught on in the old western frontier.
lawmen had little or no contact with eastern lawman in the old days before electronic communications
came to be. It took some time for western lawmen to hear
about, study and use the "new" techniques being used
in the east. This is where I saw an opportunity for a good book. Create a fictional
character who learned of this new kind of evidence, got
every book he could find on the subject, studied them and
learned from them, and used his own imagination to expand this
knowledge and make it fit the different lifestyle of the old west.
somebody was the first to put a case together with physical science clues. His success would set
precedents in the courts, and other lawmen would take
note of this and get interested in forensics too. This
would start a chain reaction among lawmen and drastically change
the way crimes were investigated. In The Claypool
Conspiracy, this young sheriff, Hank Sanders, was that man.
What were some of the challenges in writing a novel -- The Claypool Conspiracy -- that not only had to
accurately portray the setting of the "Wild
West," but also recreate as fiction a true story?
I believe a GOOD book has to be believable. How can a man do impossible things and have the reader
identify with him? I wanted my book to be as close as
possible to how forensic science really first occurred in the west.
That was the challenge for me. I didn't want Hank using methods and
techniques that hadn't been invented yet. I had to establish a
time line to go by. When did they first discover the use of
fingerprints? When did they first start using blood typing? When did
they start doing ballistic testing of weapons and bullets to
prove which gun fired the fatal shot? A hundred other things used
today in forensic science popped up sometime along this time
line...but when? I pestered a lot of my friends who were doctors,
lawyers, policemen and others for this information. It took some
time. Some of them had to do some research to answer my questions,
and I deeply appreciate their valuable help. With this time
line established, I could write a story that depicted a lawman
doing what factually could have been done in that time period.
the story is fiction, it does tell how forensic science had to have happened in the early 1880s. This
book sings the praises of an unsung hero who
probably never really knew what a positive effect his efforts created
in law enforcement in the Old West. His techniques paved the way
for a very dramatic change and improvement in crime investigation.
You have been involved with music almost your entire life it seems. You spent some 30 years as a
deejay, broadcaster and radio station owner, and you have
been entertaining musically since you inherited your first band
at age 16. You also were inducted into the Rockabilly Hall of
Fame. Does music influence your writing? What do you see as the
correlations between songwriting and storytelling? For
example, do you find yourself paying attention to the rhythm, tempo
or tone of your novels, as you would with a song?
Yes, my musical training and experience taught me many things that helped in writing a novel. One
musician does not make a band. One song does not make a
concert. And making good music requires several people working
together in close harmony.
character that doesn't really fit into the story, an event that is unreasonable, a technique that could not
possibly have been used -- these are like a sour note in
a chord...they spoil it terribly. So everything has to be in
tune, at the right rhythm, and with a pleasing tempo. And most
of all, the tone of a book must both stir and maintain the
reader's interest. Add a surprise ending to top it all off. Never let
the reader know how your story is going to end after reading
only half the book!
the way, I never knew I was even in the Rockabilly Hall of Fame until I stumbled onto it by accident one
day on my computer. Just for the heck of it, I typed the
name of my first record, "Ambridge Boogie," into the
search field and there it was! I have no idea who put me in there. If I had
any effect on the way Rockabilly developed, I wasn't aware
of it. I was just having fun and trying to make a little grocery
What has been your experience with the ebook publishing industry? What advice would you give to a
writer who was ready to publish their first book
I was thrilled to get published at all. It was almost impossible for a new author to get published
by anyone. I had a drawer full of rejection slips. If
the book market is down, a book -- no matter how good it may be -- doesn't get
published. I spent years getting nothing but rejections. I
guess I got lucky. Adventure Books was looking for good,
new authors, and Shar Durksen read The Claypool
Conspiracy and wanted it. We negotiated a contract on that book
and others I had written, and that started the ball rolling.
must have been sufficient response to The Claypool Conspiracy during its first year as an ebook on
the Internet for Adventure Books to decide to release it in
paperback as well. To have worldwide distribution is beyond
my wildest dreams. The nicest thing is this: In the time
since Adventure Books signed contracts with me, conventional print
publishers wouldn't yet have even seriously read and edited
the book. And release could still be years away.
I see nowhere for electronic books to go but up. Every day more and more people become aware of the
availability of available. And since the availability
of online books makes them instantly available anywhere in the
world, an author may actually see success while still living!
Your next novel, to be released soon by Adventure Book Publishers (http://www.puzzlesbyshar.com/adventurebooks),
is titled The Homesteader. Tell
us about this book.
The Homesteader is another adventure story that is based on facts. The story takes place immediately
after the American Revolutionary War, in the late 1700s.
Much of the story is about things passed down to me in family
family goes back to immigrants from Holland, England and Germany. Many of them came to America as
early as 1741, and wound up settling in what is now West
Virginia. Growing up on a farm in the mountains, I learned from my
father and my grandfather about the many ways new settlers in this wilderness learned to
live there, away from "civilization" and
towns. The way they cleared land, built log cabins, hunted,
fished, raised crops to feed their families. The only tools they
had were the few they could carry on their backs a hundred miles
or more over the rugged Allegheny Mountains.
my family tree are the famous "Pringle Brothers," who were the very first settlers in central West Virginia
near Buckhannon. They actually lived in a tree...a
huge hollow sycamore tree that served as their "house"
during the Revolutionary War. That spot is now a state park, bearing the name
"Pringle Tree State Park." Several members of the Pringle's
family took turns living in this tree while they constructed their own
central character in The Homesteader is a cousin in his late teens whose family lived in the tree
while building their homestead in the vicinity. Though
fiction, the story depicts the hardships they faced and the way they
lived in this primitive wilderness. Faced with harsh winters,
hostile Indians who didn't want them there, and ruthless
trappers who were often virtual outlaws, it was a dangerous life.
many of the ways people survived, the way they raised food crops, how they cured meat, trapped for furs,
survived sickness and wounds, have long since been
forgotten. As people prospered, the area grew in population, new
tools were invented, better guns were developed, new frontier
industries came into being, and people started forgetting these old
practices. They were not passed along to their children
anymore. These ways have become more and more forgotten.
am probably one of the very few people still living that actually learned the ways to hunt, trap, use
the tools of that era, and really used the knowledge
those hearty pioneers depended on to survive. How to predict the
weather by observing nature, how to store fresh fruits and
vegetables for your winter diet with no canning jars or deep
freezers. How to make tools, make furniture, grow food crops, and so
much more. I wanted to preserve this kind of knowledge
before it disappeared. I also wanted the story to be an accurate
example of what it was really like to be the first settlers in such
a remote wilderness. People had to live by their wits and the
sweat of their brow. There were no luxuries, as we know them. But
they did have fun on occasion, and lived a mostly happy life.
is one major difference in this book. Most fiction is told as if witnessed by a third party. The third
party is not involved in the lives of the characters. He is
like an observer who sees the events happen and writes about
what he sees. He also has the advantage of knowing what is about to
happen, what leads up to it, even what a foe may be thinking
and planning. The Homesteader is different...the whole story
is told as it is seen and experienced by the main character, the
cousin. He knows only his side of a story or event, has no
prior knowledge of what's coming up, and has to survive every
situation by his own wits. The story comes across as if it is
being told by the hero himself. Every detail in it is as
seen through his eyes. This was the first novel I wrote. I did not
learn until years later that this style of writing is the most
difficult way to write a book. I'm kind of glad I didn't learn this
until after the book was finished!
family are very happy I wrote this book. They too were concerned that so many of the customs and
ways of doing things in those days would be lost forever. We
all hope that those who read The Homesteader not only will enjoy
the story, but will better appreciate
the things our forefathers faced when they so boldly penetrated this pristine wilderness.
It was definitely no picnic.
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thanks for what you have. Dream about and set goals for what you want.
Author Interview: Carol Guy, Murder at the Ice Cream Parlor
and A Picture Perfect Kid
I read that your "love of a good mystery" can be traced back to the day you picked up your first
novel by Agatha Christie, the queen of cozy
mysteries. It shouldn't come as a surprise then that you've written a cozy mystery
yourself called Murder at the Ice Cream Parlor, to be released soon by
Treble Heart Books (http://www.trebleheartbooks.com).
For those who might not know, what makes a mystery
"cozy"? How are those elements manifested in Murder at
the Ice Cream Parlor?
A cozy or, as they are sometimes called, "traditional" mystery usually takes place in a small town,
or other self-contained venue, such as a university campus or secluded estate. There is a minimum of graphic
violence, and the crime is usually solved by an amateur sleuth who uses
deductive reasoning and keen observation to unmask the killer.
Murder at the Ice Cream Parlor, amateur sleuth Helen Lawson stumbles onto a murder scene one quiet spring
morning in her hometown of Bridgeville when she
enters the Bridgeville ice cream parlor for a cup of tea. What follows
is a full-scale police investigation that results in the
speedy arrest of a local "bad boy." But Helen is convinced
that the wrong man is in custody and decides to launch her own
investigation into the crime. As she begins to ask questions, Helen meets
with many obstacles, including a warning from the town
mayor to "stop messing around in police business" and
opposition from her son-in-law, a police officer involved in the
investigation. Undaunted, Helen continues her inquiries and is finally able to
put the puzzle pieces together, solve the murder and unmask
the elements of a cozy are present in Murder at the Ice Cream Parlor -- small town, character conflicts,
amateur sleuth, the wrongly accused and, of course, the use
of logic, observation and deductive reasoning to solve the
crime. In the end, a killer is brought to justice, order is
restored and life returns to normal in the idyllic little
community of Bridgeville.
You co-wrote Murder at the Ice Cream Parlor with Linda Zimmer, who lives in a different city than
you in Ohio. I imagine a lot of us picture authors as
solitary figures working at their craft. Explain for us the process by
which you and Linda coordinated the writing of Murder
at the Ice Cream Parlor. What advice do you have for others who
might want to try co-authoring a novel?
We meet for story consultations. We also work from an exact story outline and create character
profiles, so we have in front of us a detailed description of
each character including his or her place in the sequence of
events. Co-authoring will only work if you are "on the
same wave length" when it comes to story line development. I'm not
saying you can't have differences of opinion, but you need to be able
to coordinate your efforts at some point so you can move along with
the project. In our case, we knew exactly what direction we
wanted the story to take, so it wasn't that difficult.
Your other book, A Picture Perfect Kid (http://www.zumayapublications.com/title.php3?id=43),
is not so cozy a read. This is a true crime book about
the murder of a woman you knew, by her grandson. Tell
us briefly about the murder. What did you find compelling
about this crime that you thought would make it an interesting
story for your readers?
On the afternoon of Saturday, May 6, 2000 in Cape Girardeau, Missouri, 16-year-old Joshua Allen
Wolf walked out onto the upstairs balcony of the home
he shared with his 56-year-old grandmother, Carol Jean Lindley, and killed her
with a single shot from a .22 caliber rifle as she
sat in the family room below watching television. They had just
moved from Columbus, Ohio to Cape Girardeau, so Carol could take a
job as an administrator at St. Francis Medical Center. Carol's
husband, Bill, planned to join them in a few months, when he
retired. Carol and Bill Lindley had raised Joshua since early
Joshua shot his grandmother, he took her ATM card and spent the weekend raiding her bank account, as she
lay dead on the family room floor. Then, on Monday
morning, he went to school, turned in his books, told school
authorities he was moving back to Ohio, went home and set the house
on fire to cover up his crime.
is a complex story, with many twists and turns. For me, the story was compelling because I worked for
Carol as her office manager at a Columbus hospital prior
to her move to Missouri. She was my boss and my friend. The murder
occurred in Cape Girardeau, but the seeds were sown in Columbus,
and I watched as this scenario for tragedy unfolded in the
months before their move.
I made my way through the hundreds of pages of material provided to me by Cape Girardeau Prosecutor
Morley Swingle, I realized that there had been a lot of
things going on behind the scenes that would make for very good
reading. I also realized that I could bring a perspective to
the story that only someone who knew the people involved and was
aware of the situation first hand could provide.
Which did you enjoy the most: the more analytical process of researching and writing about a true
crime, or the more imaginative process of creating and
writing about a fictional crime?
Well, whether you're writing true crime or fictional mysteries, you still have to do research.
But, having written both now, I can tell you that fiction
is easier! And while mystery fiction is my preferred
genre, I'm not ruling out the possibility of another true crime
book. I didn't mind the research involved; in fact I found it
fascinating and very educational. I guess fiction appeals
to me because it is less structured and I have complete
creative freedom. Whereas, in true crime, the facts are the facts and
they cannot be changed. All you can do is try to present those
facts in a creative way that will make the piece entertaining for
the reader. That is the real challenge.
What are you working on now? Do you have plans to co-write another book with Linda?
Right now, I'm working on a mystery novel that isn't quite so "cozy." There's no amateur
sleuth in this one, just lots of intrigue, conflict, plenty of victims
and even a bit of romance thrown in for good measure. It is
called Vengeance Can Wait.
Linda and I are getting ready to start the second cozy featuring our amateur sleuth, Helen Lawson.
We hope to revisit the citizens of Bridgeville many
times in the future. This one is entitled Murder at the Church
soon from Treble Heart Books, MURDER AT THE ICE CREAM PARLOR by Carol Guy & Linda Zimmer.
House of Secrets, A Web of Lies, A Teen With Murder on His Mind. A PICTURE PERFECT KID by Carol Guy
(January 2003 from Zumaya Publications). http://www.zumayapublications.com
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